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Sometimes writing, editing and rewriting (let's call them all 'writing') can become a drag. Confidence can be knocked by rejection
or by showing work to the wrong person when it isn’t ready. Sometimes life gets
in the way, meaning there's less time or a reduced ability to focus. In the run up to
Christmas last year, I stopped writing.
In September 2013, an agent requested my full
manuscript, and the comments they made on my first three chapters were the most
complimentary I’ve received. Bowled over, I was swept into an adrenalin-fuelled
edit. A few chapters in, I received a rejection from an
independent publisher and the adrenalin-fuelled edit became a
rejection-induced plod. I plodded on until a writing course in November (described in post: Do writers need friends who write?). Shortly after that, I stopped writing for a few days. The few days became a week and so on,
my irritation accumulating each day because I wasn’t writing.
On top of this, pre-Christmas nights out and
present-buying etc ate time and made it difficult to prioritise
writing. So I decided to stop beating myself up, to take a break until after
Christmas, and To just be (the subject of my previous post).
On 2nd January, I opened my manuscript
and came up with a plan.
1. Rewrite Act Three, which needed more ooomph. 2. I asked myself: How can I make it seem as though I’m achieving something every day?
I split my manuscript into two parts, saving two
documents in Word:
The Grandson done
and The Grandson to do.
Each day I work on The Grandson to do file
and when I complete a chapter, I cut and paste it into The Grandson done.
This works well as I can see word count and number of pages moving daily. The
Grandson to do is now down to forty pages. I’m working fairly slowly
because Act Three has become a case of rewriting rather than editing.
So I have forty pages to rewrite and three scenes to
write from scratch. I’ve given myself a deadline of 9th February (and now I've told you, I'll have to stick to it!). Then I’ll put the manuscript away for two weeks before doing a final edit.
Stephen King says in ‘On Writing’:
‘I had come to a place where the straight way was
lost. I wasn’t the first writer to discover this awful place, and I’m a long
way from being the last; this is the land of writer’s block.’
Later he says:
‘So instead of moving to another project, I started
taking long walks……I took a book or magazine on these walks but rarely opened
it, no matter how bored I felt looking at the same old chattering, ill-natured
jays and squirrels. Boredom can be a very good thing for someone in a creative
jam. I spent these walks being bored and thinking about my gigantic boondoggle
of a manuscript.’
And then:
‘For weeks I got exactly nowhere in my thinking…..and
then one day when I was thinking of nothing much at all, the answer came to me.
It arrived whole and gift-wrapped, you could say – in a single bright flash.’
Isn't boondoggle a brilliant word? www.thefreedictionary.com says boondoggle means 'an unnecessary or wasteful project or activity'.
In ‘How to Write a Novel’, 47 rules for writing a
stupendously awesome novel that you will love forever, Nathan Bransford starts Rule
#34 with:
‘The most important thing you need to know about
writer’s block is this: it doesn’t exist.’
He goes on to say:
‘But when people encounter the phenomenon otherwise
known as “writer’s block,” what they are really describing is one thing and one
thing only: writing stopped being fun.’
Later he says:
‘The first step to getting unstuck is understanding
the problem you need to solve. Once you’ve identified the main issue, the
solution is just around the corner.’
He suggests going outside to ‘get fresh air and
sunshine’, exercise and staring at a blank screen. I read Nathan Bransford's 'How to Write a Novel' over Christmas and I think it's well worth a read.
So I have a deadline. After that, then what?
So I have a deadline. After that, then what?
I’m lucky to be on the Romantic Novelists’Association New Writers’ Scheme again this year. When I’ve completed the
rewrite of Book 1, I’ll be returning to Book 2, The Painting so I can send in a
manuscript by the end of August.